Initial idea- Peer Assessment

In class recently, everybody was given the chance to have a look at and peer assess each others initial storyboards / ideas. This was a very beneficial task as it gave all of us some additional insight and perspective when it comes to forming ideas and narratives for our short films/ music videos and adverts.

For my initial idea, my positives were that I had a clear idea of settings and shots, and that it was detailed enough for someone to simply make. I also had a good idea of the sounds I want to be using, to set specific types of themes and tones. 

The main improvement for my work was that there needed to be additional character build up/ progression. This is so that the audience can understand the characters more and therefore build more of a relationship between the viewer and the the short film, making for a more tense/ sinister viewing experience, ideally.

I aim to take these improvements on board as much as possible so that as I am adding and developing to my initial storyboard, I am considering the characters throughout.